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題名:Why Peer Comments Fail
書刊名:英語教學
作者:閔慧慈 引用關係
作者(外文):Min, Hui-tzu
出版日期:2003
卷期:27:3
頁次:頁85-103
主題關鍵詞:同儕評論英語寫作外語寫作臺灣學生個案研究中文Peer reviewESL/EFL writingTaiwanese studentsCase studyChinese
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     本研究旨在探討外語寫作者為何不納同儕意見。經由反覆不斷的比較六位外交系大二學生的初稿、同儕針對渠等初稿所給予的意見、六位學生依據同儕意見所修正的再稿、及研究者與渠等訪談的結果發現,這六位學生未採納部分同儕意見的主要原因有二:一為作者對其文章具有主控權,即使遇到可行之建議,亦因作者主觀判定影響,而未採納;二為耜分同儕意見太過含糊籠統,因此作者不知如何修改。據此研究者建議,同儕討論以三人小組形式進行較佳。若有兩位評論者同時對文章某部分提出建議,作者應採納此建議並做適當修正,如此可避免作者只因一人意見就修改自己文章,而喪失對有章的主導權,或因自己主觀認定而認為個人意見不足可取,以致忽略讀者的意見。最後研究者並提出四項步驟,協助教師指導同儕評論者如何提出具體可行之意見。評論者須先釐清作者原意,以免因誤解而提出不可行之意見;再指出問題所在;並根據作者上下文意宗釋為何會有此問題產生;最後再根據此一問題,建議可行之修改方法並舉例說明。如此詮盡的同儕評論才較具有說服力及參考價值,亦較能被作者採用。
     This study examines reasons why EFL writers fail to incorporate peer comments into their subsequent revisions. Through comparing and contrasting six EFL students' first and second drafts and their peers' comments as well as interviewing the students' first and second drafts and their peer's comments as well as interviewing the students, the researcher identified two major reasons for students' failure to accept peer feedback: A strong sense of text ownership on the writers' part and vagueness of feedback on the reviewers' part. The researcher recommends using response groups to maintain a balance between writers' ownership of the test and sensitivity to audience needs, and suggests using a four-step (clarifying the writer's intention, identifying problems, explaining the nature of problems, and making suggestions) approach to coaching peer reviewers in generating more specific feedlback.
期刊論文
1.Tsui, A. B. M.、Ng, Manwa L.(2000)。Do secondary L2 writers benefit from peer comments?。Journal of Second Language Writing,9(2),141-170。  new window
2.Mendonca, Cassia O.、Johnson, Karen E.(1994)。Peer review negotiations: Revision activities in ESL writing instruction。TESOL Quarterly,28(4),745-769。  new window
3.Mangelsdorf, Kate、Schlumberger, Ann(1992)。ESL student response stances in a peer-review task。Journal of Second Language Writing,1(3),235-254。  new window
4.Connor, U.、Asenavage, K.(1994)。Peer response groups in ESL writing classes: How much impact on revision?。Journal of Second Language Writing,3(3),257-276。  new window
5.Nelson, Gayle L.、Murphy, John M.(1993)。Peer response groups: Do L2 writers use peer comments in revising their drafts?。TESOL Quarterly,27(1),135-141。  new window
6.Gere, A. R.、Abbot, R. D.(1985)。Talking about writing: The language of writing groups。Research in the Teaching of English,19,362-379。  new window
7.Flower, Linda、Hayes, John R.(1981)。A Cognitive Process Theory of Writing。Research in the Teaching of English,15(3),329-343。  new window
8.Ferris, Dana R.(1997)。The influence of teacher commentary on student revision。TESOL Quarterly,31(2),315-339。  new window
9.Leki, I.(1990)。Potential problems with peer responding in ESL writing classes。CATESOL Journal,3(1),5-19。  new window
10.Carson, Joan G.、Nelson, Gayle L.(1996)。Chinese students' perceptions of ESL peer response group interaction。Journal of Second Language Writing,5(1),1-19。  new window
11.Caulk, N.(1994)。Comparing teacher and student responses to written work。TESOL Quarterly,28(1),181-188。  new window
12.Lockhart, C.、Ng, P.(1993)。How useful is peer response?。Perspectives,5(1),17-29。  new window
13.Mangelsdorf, K.(1992)。Peer reviews in the composition classroom: What do the students think?。English Language Teaching Journal,46(3),274-284。  new window
14.Carson, Joan G.、Nelson, Gayle L.(1994)。Writing groups: Cross-cultrual issues。Journal of Second Language Writing,3(1),17-30。  new window
15.Kroll, Barry M.、Vann, Robert J.(1981)。Exploring speaking-writing relationships: Connections and contrasts。College Composition and Communication,32,365-388。  new window
會議論文
1.Min, Hui-Tzu(1998)。Variables influencing the peer review in an EFL writing class。The Seventh International Symposium on English Teaching。Taipei:The Crane Publishing CO, LTD。745-752。  new window
2.Chou, M. C.(1998)。How peer negotiations shape revisions。Taipei。349-359。  new window
圖書
1.Blass, Laurie、Pike-Baky, Meredith(2002)。Mosaic 1: Writing。Mosaic 1: Writing。NY。  new window
2.Moll, L. C.(1989)。Teaching second language students: A Vygotskian perspective。Richness in writing: Empowering ESL students。New York。  new window
3.Nystrand, M.(1986)。Learning to write by talking about writing: A summary of research on intensive peer review in expository writing instruction at the University of Wisconsin-Madison。The structure of written communication。New York。  new window
圖書論文
1.Gere, A. R.、Stevens, R.(1985)。The language of writing groups: How oral response shapes revision。The acquisition of written language: Response and revision。Norwood, NJ:Ablex。  new window
 
 
 
 
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