The aim of the present work is to discuss the merits and demerits of Chin Sheng-tan's revision of the West Chamber. The author first determines that the text which Chin worked from was that of Chang Shen,thus avoiding mistakes in identification made in the past by scholarswho lacked understanding of differences among editions. He next explores the internal patterns of Chin's revision of the West Chamber, discussing limitations on the formation of artistic imagery imposed by the Confucians' "principles of the ancient sages," as well as the manner inwhich plot and character are developed in accordance with the Buddhist concept of primary and secondary causes. In following with the latter,he then characterizes Chin's commentary and revisions in terms of fineness (mi) and constraint (chu) . Finally, the author discusses the relationship between Chin's concept of "segmentation" and his division ofthe West Chamber into sections. He finds similarities between Chin's "segmentation" and Confucius' concept of fluency (ta), and shows howthe division of drama into sections originated from the division of verseinto stanzas. Furthermore, he uses this argument to confirm thatChin's critique of the West Chamber was undertaken from the perspective of the written word, and that its primary achievement lies in the analysis of character and plot structure.